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05 Atrium

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Atrium View of opera house 

Modeled in Rhino 4.0, rendered withe V-ray for Rhino, and then Photoshop edit the renderinging, bump up contrast and, add the people

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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

The space is beautiful without question. The scale and lighting and materials work together wonderfully. A few things could have been done to to make the space feel a little more thought out. For instance, there is no future to be seen, it is essentially an empty atrium. What is going to be beautiful about this space is the light coming through the glass, casting the abstract pattern of the mullion's shadows onto the concrete floor, but I don't see this captured here. It shows a much softer light coming through, which works well with the warmth of the wood, but I don't know that this would be the reality of the space. The yellow seen through the floor plates is a nice sculptural element, I wonder what kind of material this would actually be? Anodized aluminum? Also there should be a mullion where the glass hits that sculptural element or there is going to be leaking <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let…" width="15" height="15" alt=":P" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="395" title=":P (Lick)"/> The biggest thing that takes away from this rendering and portrayal of the space are the people though. They are all varying scales and I'm not a fan of transparent people. You have an 8 ft couple to the right and 6' grandma in the middle. If the people from the immediate entourage website (high five, i love that website) weren't transparent, they projected shadows, and there were pops of color from some kind of furniture layout and from the reflections of people in the metallic material to the left of the stairs, it would really make this shot come to life. The only other thing I would have added is have extended the blue sky down towards the foreground and added some kind of bird, or plane, or hot air balloon because I'm romantic like that <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let…" width="15" height="15" alt=":P" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="395" title=":P (Lick)"/>

Overall amazing space.